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Writers Block by ~drzero:icondrzero:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Typographical




<font face="courier new,monospace">
How can you deal in the startstopgo
When headheartgroin is all you know
How do you thinkfeelknow what to do
When zerozilchnada could sum up you
To fill space with voicemouthspeech
That mindsoulfear keep out of reach
Tangled are my mouthmindwords hence
Secondsminuteshours pass in silence
</font>
©2003-2009 ~drzero
:icondrzero:

Author's Comments

Erf, still working on this one, the form was almost an accident, but once I realised what was happening I decided to stick with it. The subject matter mostly about being inarticulate (which I am, a lot of the time). I think it could be longer, but as you can appreciate, adding new lines becomes difficult under these circumstances. Anyway, I'll see what I can come up with.

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:iconceredwyn:
~ceredwyn Apr 28, 2003, 11:06:04 PM
*Amazed*

This rocks. I think even in spoken word it would as well, although getting that rhythm right - ouch!

I love this.

--
Ceredwyn is Silverblue, turned into the broken one and lost the inspiration.
:iconsisterjanet:
~sisterjanet Apr 29, 2003, 9:32:19 PM
I think this is perfect as it is.
:iconecho-si:
~echo-si May 31, 2003, 6:21:59 AM
^_^

You made me giggle. This is a fun piece (on a not-so-fun topic), I like the structure and the sound. Nice ^_^

--
do your part. love your mother. :earth:

:peace:
:icondavezatch:
~davezatch Jun 17, 2003, 8:28:14 PM
"When headheartgroin is all you know"

"To fill space with voicemouthspeech
That mindsoulfear keep out of reach"

My god, you can write. wow
:iconliv-a-little001:
~liv-a-little001 Aug 20, 2005, 8:04:59 PM
:speechless: you're so talented!

--
R-O-C-K O-N :headbang: music=life
:hug:hugs make the world happier!!!!

"It was one hundred degrees,
as we sat beneath a willow tree,
Who's tears didn’t care,
they just hung in the air,
and refused to fall."
-Death Cab For Cutie
:iconsilverrainbows:
!silverrainbows Oct 8, 2005, 8:12:36 AM
lol i know the feeling. really really great poem! and awesome form, very original :)
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